資訊標題：2018菏澤sat一對一價格

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菏澤sat培訓(xùn)學校分布菏澤市牡丹區(qū),曹縣,單縣,成武縣,巨野縣,鄆城縣,鄄城縣,定陶縣,東明縣等地,是菏澤市極具影響力的sat培訓(xùn)機構(gòu)。

我們建議考生平時多練習在短時間內(nèi)完成作文的能力，自己給自己規(guī)定時間。

在第四段，作者筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，再次提到即使參加藝術(shù)訓(xùn)練班也不能滿足了，他要把自己的作品展示出來，并且終于成功地舉辦了自己的個人畫展。

to heap accolades on the man who wrote such sublime words, but that doesn't stop critics from trying to take away his glory. There are those who claim that he didn't even write the plays.

你也可以這么開始這篇文章，比如成功的人受到公眾的羨慕，有鮮花掌聲，金錢地位，但失敗的人受到公眾的唾棄，甚至是親人的蔑視等等。

總的來說，全文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，段落自然，文章的筆墨收放自如，作者知道什么地方該渲染，什么地方該一帶而過，反映了作者思路清晰，對作文題的把握很準確。

第三個句子劃線部分是插入語，表附加細節(jié)；

The goal of the Vietnam War was to prevent Communism from taking hold in that country. Many at the time believed that if Vietnam became Communist, so too would the rest of the region. When we left, the country fell to the Communist party. However, advancements in military training came out of the conflict. We learned the value of "special forces" and developed new tactics to fight in environments where tanks were less efficient than air strikes. These lessons better prepared us for modern warfare.

【文章內(nèi)容分析】

When the Columbia space shuttle disintegrated upon re-entry, the American people experienced a great tragedy led to a complete investigation of the space program. Deficiencies in the chain of command and the entire culture of NASA were exposed. As a result of the Columbia tragedy, NASA will re-examine its practices and change their ways so something like this doesn't happen again. Surely, this is a valuable thing to come from a horrible failure.

has some errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics

一般來說，閱卷者會認為幾行字是很難充分論述一個話題的。

你也可以這么開始這篇文章，比如成功的人受到公眾的羨慕，有鮮花掌聲，金錢地位，但失敗的人受到公眾的唾棄，甚至是親人的蔑視等等。

● SAT作文的正文部分

2018菏澤sat一對一價格

3. hoping I could mimic her performance，分詞形式的動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，放在句尾表補充說明；

在把自己的觀點表明后，接下來就該要舉例來證明自己的觀點了，這個例子可以放在正文里來詳細說明，但在第一段還是最好提到下面即將要舉的例子，這可以說是全文的thesis statement。

effectively and insightfully develops a point of view on the issue and demonstrates outstanding critical thinking, using clearly appropriate examples, reasons, and other evidence to support its position

本文作者在句子結(jié)構(gòu)方面的駕馭能力，可以從以下幾個例子看出一二。

用一種簡單的語言也能得滿分嗎？答案是肯定的。本文就是一例，通篇使用的詞匯都比較簡單，但并不呆板，流暢猶如小溪，活潑潑的，也惹人喜愛。

但是一定要記住，你重復(fù)的是你的中心論點，而不是中心論點句子的簡單重復(fù)。

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