資訊標(biāo)題：2018年哈爾濱報(bào)sat班

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哈爾濱sat培訓(xùn)學(xué)校分布哈爾濱市道里區(qū),南崗區(qū),道外區(qū),平房區(qū),松北區(qū),香坊區(qū),呼蘭區(qū),阿城區(qū),雙城市,尚志市,五常市,依蘭縣,方正縣,賓縣,巴彥縣,木蘭縣,通河縣,延壽縣等地,是哈爾濱市極具影響力的sat培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)。

總結(jié)段，文章把三個(gè)方面收入囊中，概括了三類人的一個(gè)共性：行動(dòng)反映他們的真實(shí)本性與想法（their actions reveal their true nature and intentions）。

所以盡管存在這樣那樣的毛病，閱卷者還是手下留情給了3分。

顧名思義，assignment就是任務(wù)，就是你這篇作文要圍繞什么問(wèn)題來(lái)展開。

對(duì)于這樣的文章，結(jié)尾段要非常注意，因?yàn)橐晃蹲C反，會(huì)讓人覺得過(guò)于咄咄逼人，因此往往在最后一段進(jìn)行平衡。“A loyal friend will probably tell you the truth when you need to hear it. But what is perhaps more important to many people is that a loyal friend also knows just how and when to lie.”文章結(jié)尾的兩個(gè)句子，雖然表達(dá)的是同一個(gè)意思，但看起來(lái)卻是再一次從正反兩個(gè)方面有力地說(shuō)明“聰明的朋友知道何時(shí)說(shuō)真話，何時(shí)說(shuō)假話”。

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（D）$50

這一句里，作者把核心內(nèi)容先用主句形式寫出來(lái)，接著用連詞as引導(dǎo)一個(gè)從句說(shuō)明自己的經(jīng)歷可以證明主句的內(nèi)容。

兩個(gè)閱卷者互相之間可能并不認(rèn)識(shí)，也不知道要對(duì)同一篇作文打分，更不知道考生的個(gè)人資料。

許多學(xué)生的一個(gè)困惑是，開始段落寫什么啊？除了直截了當(dāng)?shù)鼗卮鹱魑念}的問(wèn)題外，似乎找不到別的內(nèi)容來(lái)充實(shí)開始段落。

分析：由題意，余下的54塊蛋糕占剩下一半的1/3即1/2×1/3＝1/6，因此蛋糕總數(shù)為54÷1/6＝324，故用四個(gè)蛋的蛋糕有324×1/2＝162，用3個(gè)蛋的蛋糕有324－162－54＝108。因此總共用去雞蛋162×4＋108×3＋54×2＝1080。

（C）5

It was that year that my mind openedand I began to truly become educated. Rather than trying to fill my head with disconnected facts and other people's ideas, I now collect knowledge that I can use to form or change my opinions. And I plan to continue this my whole life, facing new situations with an educated, open mind.

雖然她所有書的銷量還趕不上克林頓一本書，但你能就此認(rèn)為她的價(jià)值就不如克林頓嗎？作者的態(tài)度不言自明。

第二部分是Assignment。

等比序列（geometric sequence）：

6分范文：

4分作文： Some people would say that something that is not successful does not have any value. I would have to disagree with this statement. Sometimes, things that are not successful still have some value. For example, the Columbia space shuttle and the Vietnam War were not successful, but they had value. Thus, it is true that something not successful can still have value. For instance, the Columbia disaster. Columbia was destroyed in an accident when the shuttle tried to re-enter the atmosphere. This accident was a horrible failure and many people were very upset by it. The value, though, comes from the new way in which we now look at things. Because of Columbia, the space program now know what is wrong. Hopefully, they will change it. Vietnam is also an example of something not successful. We went to Vietnam in an attempt to get rid of communists. Thewar went on for a while, but we were not able to win. Many soldiers were killed and the public were very angry about the whole thing. Soon there were many protests across the country and college students especially became active against the war. By the time the war was ended the people were very upset with their country. These two examples show that something not successful can still have value. As we have seen, both Columbia and the Vietnam War were not successful. Yet, we got something of value out of them. 【點(diǎn)評(píng)】 開始段落把中心觀點(diǎn)講出來(lái)了，并且也有thesis statement。

所以說(shuō)，基本的東西都有了，但和6分作文開頭比較，這篇作文的開頭稍顯單薄。

這個(gè)故事本身太不新穎了，很難打動(dòng)閱卷者。

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