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福州托福培訓(xùn)學(xué)校分布福州市鼓樓區(qū),臺(tái)江區(qū),倉山區(qū),馬尾區(qū),晉安區(qū),楊橋東路,三友大廈,福清市,長樂市,閩侯縣,連江縣,羅源縣,閩清縣,永泰縣,平潭縣等地,是福州市極具影響力的托福培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)。

To me, being an expert means being successful, and achieving success requires lots of hard work, time, and practice. This is true regardless of what you pursue, from running to drawing, acting to skating, teaching to dancing. Yet expertise and success don't come from skill alone. To truly succeed, you need to have at least as much motivation as talent, because if you don't posses the desire to do something, your talent may simply wither from neglect, and people who prove this to be the case include Jewel and my sister.

接著，作者用哥倫比亞航天飛機(jī)失事和越南戰(zhàn)爭的例子作為自己的thesis statement （As the examples of the recent Columbia shuttle disaster and the Vietnam War demonstrates, events that are not successful still have value）。

之后還會(huì)收到通過短信發(fā)送過來的分析結(jié)果。對對方的分析劃分為：曖昧度，驚訝度，集中力，和誠實(shí)度。

prefer to do A rather than do B （不能用to do B）

在結(jié)束段，作者提到，一個(gè)人的價(jià)值取決于許多方面，而不僅僅是他的productivity，并且指出了the more we do, the more we're worth這句話其實(shí)是錯(cuò)誤的。

4. The negative consequences of eating fast food often is increasingly discussed in the media.

3. When someone picks up the phone, you will be using one of the greatest inventions of the modern age.

在造句時(shí), 較高級詞匯 如能運(yùn)用貼切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一個(gè)，也會(huì)使你的作文顯示出與眾不同。

二、結(jié)構(gòu)造句 與眾不同

在造句時(shí),既要使句子生動(dòng)，又要使其簡明扼要。

1、使用與人不同的表達(dá)方式，特別是提倡打破漢語句子結(jié)構(gòu)的束縛而重組的句子更受歡迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世紀(jì)八十年代發(fā)生過一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多數(shù)同學(xué)使用了there be結(jié)構(gòu)，這是對的，但是B句卻摒棄了常見句式。另辟蹊徑而使用了 主語 謂語 賓語 結(jié)構(gòu)，且使用了terrible,hit/strike這樣的詞匯，更是難能可貴的。

2)你八月十五日的來信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.

2.使用一些強(qiáng)勢句式，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句、感嘆句、倒裝句等，增強(qiáng)語句的表現(xiàn)力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.

4)我們看到莊稼和蔬菜長勢喜人很是高興。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.

3、句式多樣,復(fù)雜得體。在寫作中應(yīng)避免使用相同長度的相同句型，而應(yīng)注意句式的變化，如長短句結(jié)合，簡單句、并列句與復(fù)合句共用，還可使用簡化句等;一些較復(fù)雜的結(jié)構(gòu)如獨(dú)立主格，分詞結(jié)構(gòu)等也可使用。下面的表達(dá)中A句簡單句多，而且多處使用 there be結(jié)構(gòu)，顯得單調(diào)、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色。

5)這是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有臥室、有洗澡間、有廚房;臥室里有床、沙發(fā)、桌子和椅子等。

A: It\'s a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: It\'s a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局謀篇 獨(dú)具匠心

在寫作中，我們可按時(shí)間、空間或其它邏輯順序來安排各要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)為使主題突出,結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，我們應(yīng)注意學(xué)習(xí)和使用交代句以及段落的主題句等。在布局謀篇上，NMET2002范文堪稱典范。請看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

(A)created nor profiting

(A)The bite pressure of wolves, harder than German Shepherds

一般來說，審題需要1分鐘，確定思路及決定論點(diǎn)和論據(jù)需要2分鐘，最后還需要2分鐘時(shí)間對寫好的作文通篇閱讀校對，以修改一些小錯(cuò)誤。

分析：假設(shè)額外取出的11顆糖果中有x顆紅色，則綠色有11－x顆。要使總共取出的糖果中紅色的比綠色的多，則3＋x＞4＋（11－x）x＞6。所以在額外取出的11顆糖果中，最少要有7顆紅色的，才能使總的紅色糖果數(shù)量大于綠色糖果數(shù)量。

Christmas is one of the best times of year for awkward family photos

In passage 1,Douglass characterizes Banks's labor policy in Louisiana as…（主旨）

D中的that指代speeds，那么按D的解釋就是speeds can exceed two hundred miles per hour，從中文角度講沒有問題，但在英文中，這樣的表達(dá)很不地道，只能說a car can exceed two hundred miles per hour。另外，D的表達(dá)也很唆。

分析：假設(shè)Zelda有x張DVDs，則Barry有x＋10張，Gary有2x張。由題意，x＋（x＋10）＋2x＝78alt4x＝68alt2x＝34，故Gary有34張DVDs。

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